江青对《闪闪的红星》的34条修改意见
以下摘自《红色往事--1966-1976年的中国电影》
1972年,在《拍摄革命样板戏影片座谈会》上,江青号召给孩子们拍摄电影。
1974年,《闪闪的红星》由八一电影制片厂摄制完成。
江青在审查时看到“小小竹排向东流”一段,不禁大喊:“让那些资产阶级的王八
蛋看看,我们无产阶级的作品多么抒情啊!”
当江青见到该片导演李俊时,江青紧紧握住他的手,兴奋地高声叫着:“我可得宝
了!可得宝了!画面真美啊!真抒情啊!你们是怎么拍的?”
随后,江青对《闪闪的红星》的修改提了一些意见,共计34条,谈话记录如下:
《闪闪的红星》是部好片子,我很喜欢,还有些不足的地方,可以再细磨一下,搞
得更完美些。一部好片子是可以演几十年的,一定要改好。
1.冬子在树杈上喊椿伢子时,视线是平的,是向远处看,而椿伢子来得很快,就在
树下,视线不对。补椿伢子应声的镜头。椿伢子上树的时候冬子可拉他一下,注意先要
接得上。
2.冬子看到潘行义去找红军时,说话声音太大。补冬子给父亲悄悄说话的大近景,
和春伢子在一旁注意听的近景。
3.在地上的银圆、珍珠等物,光太暗,把银圆擦亮些,有点反光。
4.吊打时冬子脸上没有伤痕,但后来又有了,接不上,要增加伤痕。还要增加冬子
反抗的声音,如狗腿子捉他时,说:“你凭什么捉我?”吊打他时,可说:“你为什么
打我!”
5.给小战士(李志玺)两个近景,很多戏都有他,就是导演没有给他一个近景。要
给他几个近景,这个人物就出来了。
6.宋大爹打鼓时后面要抬起头来。
7.片歌要分两段,前段是“打倒列强,除军阀……”打倒列强,打倒军阀,打倒土
豪劣绅,是民主革命的任务,这样,政治上才完整。
8.冬子被胡汉三打晕倒后,应该是闭着眼睛的。春伢子把他抱起来喊他以后,慢慢
睁开眼,又愤怒又焦急地说:“胡……胡汉三跑啦!”
9.潘行义取子弹时,增加冬子通过窗口看的两只眼的特写。外面戏不对路,太平了
。整个改。
吴修竹来叫小冬子,冬子要吃惊回头,吴修竹问话不要离开窗口,冬子的回答要果
断有力。
10.冬子父母话别时,室内应挂些辣椒、生了绿芽的姜和油菜,要有红绿和中间色
。色彩要集中使用,不要分散。
11.按当时情况,红星要红布或红丝绒做。(陈亚丁说:“改红星要牵涉到夏季外
景,有困难。”)有困难就不用改了,不是原则问题。
12.冬子、宋大爹、母亲雨中看胡汉三,不清楚,应该先看到白狗子押群众过去,
三人躲进墙角,冬子看胡汉三应是主观镜头,现在视线方向不对。
13.母亲山窝棚唱歌要增加红星特写。
14.歌声不像母亲唱的,声音、口型都不对。
15.冬子想念红军时,不要闭眼。应是睁眼向前凝视,慢慢出神,然后叮咚声,花
开。幻想完以后,仍回到凝视出神。
16.“我就是党的孩子”说得不像孩子的语气,应该是:“那我就是党的孩子啦!
”还有冬子说:“吴大叔说的,不能等!”语气太轻,没有分量。
17.胡汉三来捉母亲时,灯火的出现远近都差不多。应该由远而近,还应有狗叫。
敌人逼近时,要有很近的枪声,因为敌人靠近了,很危急了,母亲才下决心留下掩护群
众。母亲打完第一个手榴弹后,要突围往前跑,敌人发现是冬子妈,叫喊捉住她,一排
子弹打在她的脚下,突不出去了,然后才又回来,继续战斗。打完第二颗手榴弹,还可
以用“单打一”的土制手枪打出一发子弹,直到最后屋内一切能打的东西都打完了,才
拿起一把菜刀,把上来的敌人砍倒一个,又上来一个,举刀又砍,一根着火的木梁掉下
来,把敌砸死。这时大火烧起,她转身上楼,接土楼大火的远景。在火化红旗时,要在
红旗上叠出母亲左臂负伤,衣服扯破,高举菜刀的塑像。
菜刀要有伏笔,有特写,举起来后刀上要打光。开始出现刀时,还可有个菜墩子,
先把菜墩子打出去。(陈亚丁:可以把屋内着了火的东西当武器打出去。李俊:母亲可
先带群众上山,敌人追近跑不掉了,才打出手榴弹,进入半山路边土楼,阻止敌人,掩
护群众脱险。)这些想法好。母亲战斗时,中间要穿插冬子听到手榴弹声震惊、流泪、
但仍决心带群众上山的镜头。大火烧起后,冬子阻止群众去救母亲时,冬子的特写要流
出眼泪,最后的大特写还要长些。
18.冬子要求当红军时,增加一个红星的特写。
19.冬子磨刀时要有一个特写。
20.打柳溪后,小冬子到废墟前母亲牺牲的地方,要在红旗上再叠印出现一次母亲
就义时举刀的塑像。并出现“映山红”音乐,吴大叔等在音乐声中走近。
21.“严禁盐米进山”的木牌,看不清,看不清就没有悬念。一定要看清,甚至可
推近。
22.青年战士给冬子送大衣,盖上后掖好,摸一下冬子的额,有个近景,然后转身
,向修竹微笑。放哨时,冬子给送去大衣,这时还要有个青年战士和冬子的月光下近景
。
23.冬子往战士篮子里倒野菜时,应有两个人感情交流的近景。
24.冬子喝吴大叔给他特意加了盐的野菜汤时,应有一个冬子感动得眼含泪花的近
景,然后再往锅里倒。
25.冬子给大家盛饭听到了吴大叔喊他,先答应一声,然后再说“帮个忙”,走开
。
26.宋大爹的竹寮里光都太亮,比屋外还亮,没有光源,可从小窗进来侧光。
27、吴修竹说“茂源米号要找一个小学徒”,听不清楚。米店老板和靖卫团孙副官
说话时,也有很多地方听不清楚,如“明天一早”等。
28、冬子在米店看到老板有米不卖,他在思考这个问题时,应先叠化出来,后叠出
“今日无米”的字。
29、两个孩子夜话时,冬子说:“咱们在这儿也是打仗啊!”应该是“咱们在这儿
不也是打仗吗!”
30、胡汉三吃饭,不要从开头拍起,应从中间起。叫胡汉三多喝几杯,发有醉意,
不然冬子跑不了,胡汉三会整他的。冬子上楼后,先听到胡汉三打呼声,听一听动静再
开门。门一开打呼声变大。火烧时,划火柴,打呼声都要有。倒油时,胡汉三先向外翻
个身,冬子忙伏身床边,此时再给冬了一个侧伏身窥视的特写。胡汉三躺得不舒服,又
翻身朝里睡着了,然后倒油放火就更合理了。胡汉三走路,盘问小冬子,直到火烧,都
要有喝醉了的感觉,说话也是一样。
31、在米店门口冬子让春伢子给宋大爹送信时说:“我是党的孩子……”说得太平
,要斩钉截铁,像下命令一样。
32、冬子在尾声看到爸爸时,应有个眼泪掉下来的特写。
33、熬盐时吴大叔来,冬子见到要扑去搂住吴大叔的脖子。吴大叔抱住冬子,慢慢
放下来,再讲话,热情些,孩子气些。
34、旁白中说:第三次“左倾路线造成的恶果”,加一个“所”字,“所造成的恶
果”。尾声要有结束的旁白,总结童年,展示未来。
我觉得指示的还是挺专业的,她说这电影多么抒情,有道理。
不过她她没改之前的可能更抒情一点,改了之后是情感更强烈了吧。
是啊,江青在文艺方面还是有点才华的。这些电影的修改意见都靠谱,八个样板戏也算是成功的革新,江青的摄影作品当年还被鲍昆老师模仿。如果毛夫人当年善了终的话,她的百度百科词条让应该也有很成功颇丰的履历。
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